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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Suddenly the sky Was not gray The street less dark There were flowers Though of course It was not yet Spring Leaves bloomed on the trees Robins flew in the air A cardinal sang There was Red and blue Especially blue Pale and beautiful As the dress she wore Long and flowing Above her shoes That sent a call With every step she took For the sad old world To give itself another chance And be not dead To high romance I was there This I saw With my own eyes . |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
oh wow I love this........wow |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A great example of John's poetry. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
A sight to see for sure, my friend. Enjoyed this. j. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as always, feeling this~~ M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And be not dead To high romance To take to heart, while remembering you, dear John. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
really like this one...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I especially loved that part about every step she took sending a call ... "For this sad old world To give itself another chance" |
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