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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2012-07-16 02:05 AM

Capturé par tes grands yeux,
je ne rêve que de merveilles,
de glaces à la groseille pourpre,
ou au cassis sur tes épaules,
du rouge à lèvre au goût d'amande,
et de nuits comme des corbeilles
ta robe blanche qui tombe nue,
et moi qui jette le soleil dessus,
comme un citron sur tes lèvres
dont je rêve comme un oiseau,
de ta peau aux mots de fleurs,
je vagabonde dans tes yeux,
capturé par mon coeur de fruit,
capturé par tes grands yeux,
je ne rêve que de merveilles.

Captured by your deep eyes,
I dream only about marvels,
about ice creams in the purple currant,
or in the blackcurrant on your shoulders,
about lipstick in the taste of almond,
and of nights as baskets,
your white dress which falls naked,
and I who cast the sun above,
as a lemon on your lips
about which I dream as a bird,
of your skin in the words of flowers,
I wander in your eyes,
captured by my heart of fruits,
captured by your deep eyes,
I dream only about marvels.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-07-16 02:50 AM

"I dream only about marvel"...
and the marvel is that love has found you?
Wonderful read, Yann.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-07-16 07:18 AM

This a very romantic penning, my friend. It'll melt the women's hearts.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2012-07-16 08:30 AM

Romanticism most pleasant and fine!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2012-07-16 08:51 AM

Lovely romantic thoughts, yann.
Ida

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-07-16 04:58 PM

Cool piece, my friend.

j.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-07-16 05:19 PM

A beautiful poem filled with romance...well done, Yann...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2012-07-20 08:31 PM

Wonderful romantic piece with so many nice lines. I find myself reading "I wander in your eyes" as I wander into your eyes...James

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2012-07-22 02:30 AM

I really like this, so up to the top again...hope you don't mind if I borrow a line from this...James

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2012-08-05 03:31 PM

This is you at your best, yann. I love this.

Alison

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2012-08-06 04:33 PM

Yann, l’amour n’avait jamais été décrit comme en la langue française, surtout comme tu l’as fait ici et dans plusieurs d’autres poèmes!

Owl

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

11 posted 2012-08-07 05:30 AM

beautiful poetry, fine writing, Yann.Enjoyed!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2012-08-07 08:38 PM

Oh my gosh, this is absolutely delicious. Love your way with words, islander~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

13 posted 2012-08-09 02:03 PM

quote:
ta robe blanche qui tombe nue,
et moi qui jette le soleil dessus,

I adore your creativity here, dear Yann. This is absolutely delightful!

Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2012-08-16 10:22 PM

Lets keep this one going...James

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