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Open Poetry #48

The Ball Gown

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2012-07-13 04:42 PM

You have my smile stored away...
weren't meant to go away
sorry that I ruined the gown
of deepest blue
while bare foot twirling with you
ocean splashing at out feet
I woke as if from a dream
As u slipped away in my night
And real or not felt you left me feeling
Like a queen

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-07-13 07:20 PM

"And real or not felt you left me feeling
Like a queen"
I love this statement and the whole poem...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2012-07-13 09:03 PM

Tank you : )

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-07-22 02:06 AM

Very nice...James

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