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Creation's Felonious Crime
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Creation's Felonious Crime |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us darkness doth pervade the land the sea roils 'neath its might a black angel conducts powerful symphony his bloody design put into place conception's absurdity is predetermined infinity has revolving doors enduring virtuous taste is wickedly tainted compassion laced, justice hunters faux seek by slothful, unearthing injustice deceiving even themselves the errors of their ways future generations are left the lies the creation, then brought on by an ego unsurpassed, but suspect has given rise to hate, blood and carnage which the little word "love" cannot prevent surely He knew that ©June 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Personally...I believe HE did know and it was part of the overall plan...I love how you wrote this poem, my friend...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY powerful 'write' !! MUCH applause from this humble street corner in Time's fugacious whimsy amid the 'Runaway American Dream' |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Karen, you might be right. Thank you for you nice thoughts. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the comments in the middle of that American Dream, Bruce. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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