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MetalRose
New Member

since 2012-06-18

Posts 9
Ventura, Ca

0 posted 2012-07-11 03:39 PM

  We met as teens and instantly fell in love. There was nothing better in the world I could ever think of...

  Two years has passed and our little girl was born.
A love now so strong it could never be torn..

  We held her together, she had a warm embrace.
You whispered " She's beautiful!" I told you "she has your face"

   We have our happy little family, everything else didn't matter.
It was just a few more years before it would all  go and shatter.

  Everything seemed so perfect, how could I be so wrong?
You'd eventually turn your back on us and then you were gone..
  You tried to bring me down, but you forgot one thing.
I have a new happiness now that you could never bring.

  A beautiful little girl to always stay by my side. A new love so strong that it makes me cry..

  But they're tears of joy, a love you'll never know. Since apparently the love we shared was all for show.

  But that's ok, because this new love is strong and this new love is pure.
Go ahead and have a nice life with your new family, because we most definitely DON'T need you here

Veronica Morales

[This message has been edited by MetalRose (07-13-2012 04:59 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-07-11 04:08 PM

I hear you talking, Veronica. Love. It just doesn't seem to equate for the long term, does it?

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

MetalRose
New Member

since 2012-06-18

Posts 9
Ventura, Ca

2 posted 2012-07-11 04:37 PM

He and I shared a love so strong that I couldn't imagine anything for me to love more.
But our love didn't last and our love wasn't real.

The love for my child is love so strong and the love she has for me is unconditional, there is nothing else like it. So basically I'm saying you took your love from me , from us. But you can never take my daughters love away from me like you took yours....

.

Veronica Morales

[This message has been edited by MetalRose (07-13-2012 04:54 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-07-11 11:24 PM

Fine writing...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-07-12 04:43 PM

Welcome to PIP I know you'll enjoy your time here.
It's sad when the family unit breaks up after such strong feelings.
However, I like your attitude in this and your perspective for the future.

Good write.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-07-12 06:37 PM

Perfectly said...I know the kind of love you mean...my oldest is now 39 and though her father and I didn't last my love for her is eternal and complete...Welcome...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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