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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Desired The forest path awaits Awaits footsteps walking Walking naked of shoes Shoes meant for little feet Feet that are just size six Her silent step’s known here Here among scented pines Pines that sing ancient songs Songs of wind in branches Branches shiver with joy Continues well known path Path leading to desired Desired within her soul Soul that searches for one One whose love is seen Steps are quickened forward Forward to secret place Place where one becomes we We kinhined in the woods Woods that rejoice for us While moving together Together sharing love Love that needs to grow Grow when it is desired Desired by seeking heart Karen Mc Neil July 10, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Beautiful paths to love's desire. This is so lovely, Karen. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, that special place is something I can totally comprehend. My first wife and I used to take walks to our "special" place beneath the tall pine trees. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
To this day, I still recall those tall pines. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Scooter Member
since 2012-07-10
Posts 68 |
Let's all hear it for those "special places." "The way to crush the bourgeoisie is to grind them between the millstones of taxation and inflation."-Vladimir Lenin |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely Karen Nice images as always and that desired heart is there floating like the elusive butterfly of love as expressed by Bob Lind. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Gorgeous poem Karen, You certainly have a way with words and I am going to very much enjoy reading all your work. You speak to my soul. Cheers N'oz |
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