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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 poetry unlocks secrets of insane men and schizophrenic females written to whom it may concern read by hardly anyone you know but . . . everyone you correspond with ©June 19, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yep, JP, poetry is a sanctuary to sanity lol, smiles ms. e |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You got it, Ms E, and I thank you heavily for it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are so right, Jerry. There are two sides to every story...and every poet. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes, to poets and writers such as I, there are three sides, and you don't even want to know what the third side is, Ida. Yuk.Yuk. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
WOW...so very true...one of my assignments is to learn to write dark poetry...I think I will learn from this one...well done...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate it, Karen, I love dark, but don't write as much as I used to. Maybe this one will get me back into it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine writing Jerry, for all I know poetry is good and you are good at expressing from your heart. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I thank you, Prasad, for your kind remark. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Hardly anyone you know..." that statement says a ton. It's almost the duty of a poet to touch the souls of others. Others they have never met, even. And yet the bond is felt, and absorbed. The poet becomes part of the lives of those people. Great stuff here, JP. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absolutely, Michael. We never know how profoundly someone we had never heard of accepts our poem and how it makes them react and think. Thanks for coming over here today. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
And touch people you do my friend! You can wrench all the emotions with ease. That is what makes you so good Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
lol, ok, now that must be my problem... no not the skitzo part...the corresponding part....I don't correspond with anyone...shrug |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! You're corresponding to me, luminosity. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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