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Foresight in the Dark Night
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Foresight in the Dark Night |
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mvvenkataraman Member
since 2011-11-12
Posts 72India |
The Sun is going to in the West settle The World has seen now great battle The upper hand taking a better edge As if that is the best and truest judge Rats are already eaten by kitten Goats have been made into mutton Cats are chased and badly frightened Men are by dogs finely enlightened Sky displays its fine colorful dresses Its purpose, Moon silently expresses Stars come to exhibit twinkling figure Attracting all though not at all bigger Many birds fly despite severe darkness They proceed having in mind calmness Clouds play with Moon hide and seek Darkness gradually reaches the peak I am lying on the terrace facing the Sky Tragedies and joys are happening, why? Unknown God is playing a game here May come cheer or tear or fear dear. mvvenkataraman |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The lone sentinel keeping a lonely watch and hoping for the best, but seeing the dark swallow all. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I can feel the loneliness...thanks for sharing...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I enjoyed the other comments. However, there's a certain beauty in that lonliness and it makes one mature and open minded. Good writing and welcome to PIP you'll enjoy it here. Take Care Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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