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Star Dancing |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Star Dancing He casts his shadow into star-field to wander among constellations his sign still remains a mystery is Aquarius from water signs or maybe Taurus the bull no matter his shadow moves along In the distance she casts her shadow one part is cusp Gemini the twins the other is Cancer the crab she moves through Orion the hunter and Monoceros the unicorn best of all Aquila the eagle Each shadow moves through the star clusters drawing closer in the milky way ancient music sings from star to star romantic waltzes of eternity bringing them together Star Dancing Crater the goblet quenches their thirst Throughout the night their shadows are joined moving together in perfect time to songs written in the beginning bringing together cosmic lovers who find a way to express feelings joined in Celestial Star Dancing Karen Mc Neil June 28, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Love this "Star Dancing"... Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Had me moving right along with the two shadows, Karen. Fantastic thought patterns within this beauty. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Ms. E Thank you...it was such a star filled night that I just couldn't resist word dancing with it...I am glad you likr it...*BIG HUGS* Jerry *grin* you can shadow dance any time...I am glad you enjoy the vision...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The stars are amazing, especially when they dance for you. I always love your imagery. Michael |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful presentation of the beauty of the stars. Those metaphors are wonderful and enhance the appreciation so much. Love the following... "Each shadow moves through the star clusters drawing closer in the milky way ancient music sings from star to star romantic waltzes of eternity bringing them together Star Dancing Crater the goblet quenches their thirst" Also once again exposes your open expressive heart. Write on! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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