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Open Poetry #48

Breaking Down Love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-06-28 01:10 AM

Breaking Down Love

Lets break love down.
There is love
in the form of a person
and there is love
as an experience
and even though
love the person departs,
love the experience
can still live on
inside of your heart.
So if the object
of your love
has gone away,
the feelings and desires
that have grown
inside of your heart
can live on
to love someone new
upon another day.

JamesLee
27June
2012

A Lovers Triology
in three parts.

1/Breaking Down Love
2/Past the Heartbreak
3/Someone New

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-06-28 01:56 AM

You just transfer every emotion over..
like a checking account, but with better interest?
Hmmm... something to think about, James!
Lol, Ms. E

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2012-06-28 04:32 AM

Agreeing with every word and thought. The love we gave or recieve remains forever no matter the changes that come along. jo

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-06-28 06:40 AM

It is the love that you have in your heart. You aren't transferring it, you have found someone else you can give that love to, with a better understanding of how to make it work.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-06-28 09:43 AM

Oh, JP, your response to James's (I forgot to say)
Beautiful poem, brought tears to my eyes.
Yes, James... what JP said.
Ms. E

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-06-28 11:19 AM

Well said...I agree with Jerry...we need to learn from every love experience...very well written...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-06-30 08:10 PM

Thank you ebonygirl, late arrival, JerryPat
and Startime for the wonderful responses...appreciate the comments very much...James

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