Open Poetry #48 |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
late afternoon tea auntie tells her history suddenly it’s dawn |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, I had a uncle who had so many wonderful stories to tell we would always lose track of time listening to him. I can relate. Nice pic too. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautifully rendered. I can just "see" the rapt listeners of Auntie's history . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Michael, thank you. Sadly she has passed but thankfully I have wonderful memories and great stories that she told. Marti |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
JerryPat2, thank you. She always had a captive audience when she told her stories! Marti |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It has been a long time since I talked... or listened... through the night. Times with reason to do so are treasures... Beautiful work! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What lovely memories of your Auntie. Well told. Love, Joyce |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Marti, I am so deeply glad that you have such exquisite memories. I haven't heard her stories, but I felt them, as I read your exquisite poem and imbibed your equally exquisite picture. Hugs for missing her Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sounds magical, dear Marti! To talk and to be raptured and on top of all to experience the miracle of dawn, what can one desire more than this? Margherita |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Thank you all for your very kind words. My Auntie was a very special lady and I miss her so much. We used to talk for hours when we'd get together. ooxx Marti |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So perfect in all ways. xoxoxo A |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This tells it all, my friend . . . j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice writing and thoughts. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Applause! a beautiful senyru. I can relate to this, it is like stories around campfires of my youth. What happened to those people that kept my attention all night by the tales of their life..? I see by this, that those stories hold your intrigue also. Thank you for the poem, and very good matching picture. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Was thinking of my grandmother - gone since 1980, and thinking of this piece again made me smile...just though you'd like to know... j. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
v. well said ... fine photo-imagery as well! |
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