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The Art of Consolations
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The Art of Consolations |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Today I will conjure you Out of this warm June air The tall pines Stand still Though there is Coolly perceptible A small breeze The flowers flutter As if excited that You will arrive And there you are An uncommon miracle Out beyond where words fail Unable to convey The change you bring By just your being Here where nothing Ever was worth mentioning Your smile Your slender figure Beckoning Now listen To the cardinals Sing . |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I love to weave these types of visions...you have done a wonderful job with your words...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
John, this is beautiful. Alison |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful feeling of longing here, John Ida |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I've always liked your writing style, beautiful as always. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You convey poignant emotions with this beauty, John. And ... what a fantastic title! Margherita |
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