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Open Poetry #48

Sunset Decuain

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2012-06-19 08:26 PM

The purple, pinkish, orange, golden sky
presents itself most boldly in the west.
The colors wrap around a fiery eye
that stares at me- directly at my chest;
they burn a hole and settle ‘neath my breast.
The breeze is cool as sunbeams grow too weak
to tan the skin on shoulders left undressed.

The eye sinks slowly as the seagulls shriek.
The purple, pink, and orange kiss my cheek.
Oh, what a lovely, breathtaking technique.

*Amber

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-06-19 08:50 PM

What a lovely and exotic manner you presented this perfect poem to us tonight. I will carry these two lines to bed with me tonight. "The breeze is cool as sunbeams grow too weak
to tan the skin on shoulders left undressed." Beautiful poetry . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-06-19 10:04 PM

A beautiful vision wrapped in your words...wonderful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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