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Rain Drops |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Rain Drops Rain drops beat mournful tunes on my window A cooling breeze flows through the dry forest Branches turn upwards to catch precious drops A dry path quickly turns to earth filled mire Tears fall from eyes just learning how to cry Breeze cools the face as pain squeezes the heart Face turns up seeking solace in the rain Feeling sad from tunes cleanses the spirit Listen to drip, drop of life giving rain Feel the nourishment it gives to the earth Taste the elixir of it on the tongue See how it brings the world around to life The sun comes out to sparkle off the trees Steam flows upward replenishing the clouds Soft breezes now caress questing spirit Rain drops have brought rebirth to heart and soul Karen Mc Neil June 18, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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niteismyday Junior Member
since 2012-06-19
Posts 35 |
This is a very well written poem, I really enjoyed reading it. It portrayed a beautiful image in my mind. Keep it up! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Raindrops of life stirring the soul... beautifully portrayed. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You found the emotions that had me gulping off and on throughout this fantastic written poem, Karen. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Cleansing raindrops, I love that, Karen. Ms. E |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
niteismyday Thank you very much for the encouragement...*BIG HUGS* Michael Thank you...with someone of your talent the compliment means much...*BIG HUGS* Jerry I always draw from life...*BIG HUGS*  Ms E. There is something about the rain that I love and feel within my soul...Thank you...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing, love the monsoon and the raindrops. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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