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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-06-17 12:05 PM

Some of Her Time

She danced in the clubs
close to the Folies-Bergere
hoping she would dance
in the big time someday.
On Sunday mornings she
would have some
time for me
to talk to laugh
to eat to dance
to share some of her
time romantically.
I knew at that time
she didn't mind
being mine
but she would
lose that time
on the day that
she made the big time,
after all of the work
right in the middle
of her struggle
once she made it
at the Moulin Rouge
she had no more time
to kiss and snuggle.

JamesLee
15June
2012

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2012-06-17 03:14 AM

James, nice writing.

A

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-06-17 06:55 AM

Nice.--Jerry

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2012-06-17 08:25 AM

Nice...j.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2012-06-17 11:49 AM

Someone once told me, "Each person's life is a strand of fate... And all the strands cross and twist and wind themselves through each other on the way to their final destination. That two came together for awhile and then separated is never something to ultimately be grieved, but appreciated." It sounds to me like you have the appreciation part down, and had the forsight as well to appreciate it even then, when you knew it wouldn't last forever.

Very enjoyable read, James. You inspire me.

Michael

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-06-17 06:55 PM

James

Good writing, you took the most out of the time and even though it might hurt you accepted it for what it was, a touch with permanance excluding the reality of the situation.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-06-17 07:01 PM

sad that it came to an end but it sounds like you were happy while it lasted...very well written...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

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