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Open Poetry #48

Controlled Rage

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2012-06-14 02:02 PM

Walls are hopeful hubris crafted into planes,

part of hapless searching for immortality

and safe harbor during storms of metaphor

no less real than those of Mother Nature;

walls when joined create within

a space wherein each dream's cost

contains naught but emptiness with echoed cries

for human egos catching tears that would be lost

within the dark infinity of rains.

©2012 by icebox

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-06-14 03:02 PM

I love the power of storms...natures fury fills me with awe...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-06-15 05:55 PM

And the walls rage on and within...
Insightful, Icebox
Ms. E

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2012-06-16 11:06 AM

Thank you for your time, and for the gift of your thoughts.

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