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Open Poetry #48

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-06-13 12:14 PM

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I miss
The way
You moved

A step slower
Than the rest

Taking in
What others around you
In their rush to nowhere
In particular ignored

As if there was
All the time in the world
Which you somehow seemed
To know as if from past
Experience wasn’t true

And where is that now
To which you’ve returned
Waking up from this passing dream
Are there flowers sparrows
Sparkling stars and a silver moon

Take care be well
Let no harm come to who you are

I’ll be there in a little while
Doing what I can to make you smile

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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-06-13 02:32 PM

Your message to her is so very tender it brings a tear to the eye...well said...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2012-06-20 09:44 AM

I agree with Startime... the tenderness, caring and respect in your words really touches my heart.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-06-20 09:53 AM

Enjoyed your poem,
Ms. E

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