Open Poetry #48 |
Whisper Quiet |
WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Whisper quiet upon my neck As your favorite shade leaves soft pink tattoos on my skin and your words find refuge in my soul Subtle inuendo in your sparkling eyes with a murmered invitation, you Whisper quiet upon my neck. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... I think I'll buy stock in SHOUT... lipstick stains are hard to get out! *S* Not that either of you are going to mind. *G* Love this! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I agree with *S*...a delight to read...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Within a few chosen words a passionate tempest you have created. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well written intimacy! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Delightful reading, Tracey. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
sexy silence weaves around each word. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thank you one and all for your comments on my short poem. It is nice to see them. Tracey |
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