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Steamy, Sultry Night in the Vieux Carré
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Steamy, Sultry Night in the Vieux Carré |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 walking slow, oh it could be called dancing crowded with Bourbon Street night people music filling the air, we stop every so often wrapped arms around each other and swayed firing up to the already hot-blood New Orleans seems to affect all the out-of-town tourists and the nights are specially made for physical reaction big easy, sin city, whatever, a city of cool coitus her willowy body pressed so close to mine her face in my neck nuzzling and groping I feel her eyelashes teasing, pleasing, my neck we're fused together with lover's super glue she broke away, her café au lait eyes dancing as she tiptoed up to speak softly in my ear in her intense and absolute Cajun accent sha, we gon stay out heah on da street all night lovely Denise didn't need to say anymore I danced her back to her pad above Galatoire's and it wasn't just to get the grime off when we showered with plenty of soap and water ©May 20, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Lovely, JP... and big smiles. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, Ms. E. True story, as are many of my poetry. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
My how you did get around, you devil!  Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, I guess I did some. But I always will regret missing out on a certain one. Thank you for stopping by, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Very sultry indeed...you have a talent for bringing hot to life...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* [This message has been edited by Startime1955 (06-14-2012 11:04 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, memories. What in the world would we do without them when we reach a certain age? Thank you, Karen. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of walking on Lewer Street late into the night before they redid it...it doesn't have the same feeling now...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, James. No, once they rebuild they lose a lot of character that was there which can't be replaced. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, yep, and yep ... to all Your comments, my friend... been a helluva trip though, huh?? j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you,j. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
There are no streets like that one in my little town. The city put up street lamps that echo the gas lamps of yesteryear, but nearly all the shops are empty and abandoned in Old Town. Only a few seedy bars remain, and the street lamps will wait a long time for lovers. As for City Hall, I have to shake my head. They could have done better putting the street lights out on the dunes. They defintely do not want my two cents worth. Your poem made me smile, though!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am happy I could bring a smile to your face, Klassy Lassy, and thank you for being here on my street. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Romantic Evenings are good, Jerry. Fine writing, took me to that Street! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Prasad, I appreciate the comment. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey there you're smokin man! I bet you're glad that lover's super glue isn't like the real stuff...... What can I say, right out of the mind of a talented novelist. You're good just good! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, Eric, you're snowing me and it is full-fledged summertime, but I thank you anyway. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he, no I'm not, I hate snow.....Write on! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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