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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-06-06 08:32 PM

I saw your face and I was stunned,
Was beguiled by your words;
From face to words you looked like fun,
We met, your voice I heard.

Seven months have come and they have gone,
We shared good times, we laughed:
Oh my yes, we were surely drawn,
We listed high on love’s graph.

Now the sunset seems to have set,
Like mist of summers rain:
There is a real and growing threat,
We will not meet again.

©Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-06-06 10:14 PM

How very sad...I would that no love sets with the sun...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2012-06-07 03:21 AM

Man! There's some great blues lines in this one.....smile.....you know me and the blues.

Great writing once again Jerry and a fine concise look at the spinning love life that circles everywhere.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-06-07 06:27 AM

I would wish that also, Karen, but unfortunately,it does.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-06-07 06:29 AM

Appreciate your observation, Eric. The best writing, I have heard comes from a broken heart.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-07-2012 07:18 AM).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-06-07 01:33 PM

Oh I don't know about that Jerry.
The best writing comes from happiness and the blues two different dimensions.
You are very good at what you do and I hope you write a best seller it's only a pen stroke away.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-06-07 02:16 PM

Oh, I've given up a long time ago on writing a best seller, Eric, I am merely trying to keep my sanity, what little of it I have left . . .

~*~ A word after a word after a word is power.--Margaret Atwood ~*~

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