Open Poetry #48 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
I would wonder now about the day after when you said you would be beyond that ache place altar, submission that helpless feeling of gown fit that leaves so much of you uncovered and you climb down from the stairway then lady like but without modesty on purpose so accidental can make its way into you and a stumble here and there would appear to leave so much of you uncovered but then the lights would dim for a moment like the power had just been interrupted before everything you had was public knowledge so you were safely within your comfort zone believing everything had been recovered... until you stepped awnless above my glances _____________ daark |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
very warm to the eyes that see...well done...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: awnless love this word and the use you make of it. It is understood that your glances are dangerously magnetic ![]() Very nice as usual. Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm so glad Margherita explained that. I love your work because of the clever ambiguity that makes it an adventure. Once again very enjoyable. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Star, thank you _____________ Ms Mar, thank you lady friend _______________ ET..thanks much amigo |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
![]() I love this. It is kind of like having a secret phone conversation when you're at work and surrounded by people that want to nose in on what you're doing. And a few other things, too. There's more than one way to skin a cat... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Moppet...I just love skinning cats...real slow..thanks for wearing kitty whiskers and other things. |
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