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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-06-06 09:21 AM

You've swathed me in not understanding
what made the terrible darkness
descend upon our everlasting light
and love
You've hidden yourself away
like hiding in the eye of the sun
I cannot find you
I have fears
my thoughts are many
and they are
one and all nightmarish in scope
You've taken the stars from my sky
and only you
can flip the switch
and turn them on again

©June 6, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2012-06-06 02:48 PM

artfully dark and forboding...
I hope the light will return...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-06-06 03:02 PM

Me too, Karilea. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-06-06 05:41 PM

May the stars shine again for you, dear Jerry, hopefully even brighter than before ...

This is highly emotional ... and quite scary just like the picture!

Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-06-06 05:46 PM

Jerry
This is very sad but with that type of sadness always comes some sort of mystic beauty and we continue to write about it.
Good writing my friend.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2012-06-06 05:49 PM

Thanks, Margherita, for your kind words. I treasure them.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-06-06 05:50 PM

Yeah, I know Eric, but I have written the dark poetry for so long I was very happy to give light and love a chance. Thanks, man, for stopping by and commenting.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2012-06-06 06:00 PM

Sadness makes my heart hurt for you...I hope the stars are again lit for you, my friend...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-06-06 06:04 PM

Thank you, Karen, my friend. I hope so also.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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