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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-05-31 08:54 PM

He removes his clothing slowly
Keeping eye contact
Proud of his body, his abs
And all the rest
Especially all the rest

His blond hair, naturally wavy
Eyes blue as southern skies
Penetrating as an old gator's tracking gaze

Skin white as refined sugar cane, hers Cajun brown
some creases in both their faces
adds flavor to the aura of their independence

in the deepening ebony night he comes to her
she's as precious as midnight's beguiling
she says he wastes his passion on the frail of her

still . . . neither of them can release the other
maybe her fondling, groping fingers
and his probing hands are mendacious and lying
but I wouldn't want to be the one to suggest it

©May 16, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-05-31 09:21 PM

HOT!!! okay it's spring and you have love in your life you lucky man...for the rest of us we take your visions and fly with them *wink* *HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-31 09:31 PM

Whatever you can take from my words, take them and prosper because from them, Karen, love, real love is there for everybody. I was a skeptic. Now I believe.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-05-31 10:25 PM

OMG! Jerry! Whew! (and then some)

Lori

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-05-31 11:15 PM

Umm... humm..., don't know what to say,
only that, I LIKE IT, A LOT! Lol... oh, JP your love
must be a happy woman.
Smiles, ms. e

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2012-06-01 05:42 AM

Thank you, my friend, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-06-01 05:43 AM

Good to see you, ms. e, and you said everything right, and I appreciate it.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2012-06-01 06:04 AM

What a great read on a cold South African day! Yes, a "hot" write, Jerry.

Helen

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-06-01 06:53 AM

Sorry the day where you are is cold, Helen, and thank you for your kind words about my poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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