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Open Poetry #48

The Land of Living Dreams

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-05-30 04:13 PM

The Land of Living Dreams

Smiling – full moon gazing down
meadow that’s bathed in its light
Caressing – gentle soft breeze
whispered words in waiting ears
Gazing – star filled evening skies
wishing on a passing star

Meadow – awaits the dreamer
wild flowers amid the green
Whispered – visions formed from thoughts
sent into the universe
Wishing – to ancient forest
deliver the chosen one

Wild – eternal is the song
chanted through the human mind
Sent – aloft in velvet skies
weaving in rainbow colors
Deliver – by mystic winds
love that flows from mind to mind

Chanted – in a language pure
deep within eternal soul
Weaving – threads into visions
timeless words paint the picture
Love – The Land of Living Dreams
where miracles still happen

Karen Mc Neil
May 30, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

1 posted 2012-05-30 04:42 PM

Wow! Your poem blew me away. It took me on a wonderful trip in a living dream. Loved how you used the words from each line to form out this beautiful poem.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-30 05:49 PM

Yep. Ken is correct, this is a beautiful and impressive love song to be sung or recited under a heavy full moon. Fireworks soon would commence I have a feeling.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-06-02 04:03 AM

Aw this is so nice.....love the positive beauty and hope....
Love it.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2012-06-02 08:54 AM

Every single marvellous thought can be placed upon your smiling lips, there is the touch of love and beauty, beyond time and space.

Very captivating!

Margherita

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