Who Will Drive Your Soul (a long forgotten challenge)

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Open Poetry #48

Who Will Drive Your Soul (a long forgotten challenge)

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2012-05-29 12:58 PM

Who will drive your soul
As you wander your path
Through this world
That is so bereft of any life
With which to offer meaning
Unto those who drift alone
Seeking Searching Screaming
Begging for another soul to understand
The pain offered by an existence
Within their own heads
They cannot fight it
So they continue to look to you for the answer
As they ask you once again
Who will drive your soul
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-29 06:07 AM

Looking for answer used to be a futile attempt by me and I spent decades looking. Finally I stopped looking to answers fro others and looked inward. There is where you will find the answers.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-05-29 01:57 PM

I totally agree with Jerry...looking inward answers so many of our questions...this poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it..*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-05-30 06:36 AM

Very beautiful response to that challenge, dear Bradly. In fact, it is as you say, we need to reach out, because TOGETHER we walk this path of life much better. And then of course I also believe we have the Eternal Source of Light within us Who is forever vigilant and loving and guides our souls back into the light if we get stuck on dark sideways.

Very nice work.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-05-31 10:56 PM

I liked this distraught piece, I can relate.
And of course it is true what they say about looking inside. Easier said than done is true as well.

Lori

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2012-06-01 04:48 PM

Thank you all for reading this. I very much appreciate it.

Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition

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