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Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

0 posted 2012-05-28 01:22 AM

Jasmine dreams

Intoxicating fragrance of jasmine buds on your locks,
Fill vacant lonely rooms of my wandering heart,
Innocence whispering sounds through your eyes,
Wound me ever so gently from the very start,

Your words those precious white pearls of the sea,
I would dive breathlessly into waves and seek,
Tender soft shyness of yours like new born leaf,
Spring time love, blooms everywhere so to speak,

Warmness of your subtle smile like mid-day rays,
Basking in your warmth, spending my days in dreams,
Listening to chirping birds and swinging bees,
Walking across your meadows and flowing streams.

(Dedicated to my lovely wife! Asha)
©Prasad.N 27th March 2012.
All rights reserved to Prasad.N

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-28 06:14 AM

This is just beautiful, Prasad.

~*~ Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.--Aristotle ~*~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2012-05-28 12:18 PM

I agree with Jerry.
Absolutely beautiful!
Well written and such a loving tribute to your lovely wife.

Eric

"Fill vacant lonely rooms of my wandering heart,"

I'm happy for you she does that.....smile....

true love never looks after it's own interests

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2012-05-28 12:44 PM

Nice to see you writing again, Prasad. Lovely poem.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2012-05-28 05:28 PM

Dear Prasad, this is a delight to read, just wonderful. And I can imagine the happy smile of your wife Asha when you read the poem to her

.

So nice to see you here.

Margherita

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-05-28 06:51 PM

A poem filled with love for your wife...this is beautiful...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2012-05-29 01:14 AM

Lovely...
Ms. E

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2012-05-29 02:20 AM

absolutly delightful, i love the grace of images and what they are supposed to do, make us dive, indeed in the sea, thanks again, prasad,

yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

8 posted 2012-05-29 02:32 AM

Thank you for your kind words, Jerry. Appreciate it.
Thank you, Eric, for your kind words. Yes, she really does that. Appreciate it.
Thank you for your kind words, Ida. Yes, it feels great to read such inspiring words and write again. Thank you.
Thank you, Dear Margherita, for your kind words. She was overjoyed when I read it to her. Happy to read your comments too.
Thank you, Karen for your kind words. Appreciate it.
Thank you, Ms.E, for your visit and kind comment. Appreciate it.
Thank you for your thoughtful and kind words, Yann. Appreciate it.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

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