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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Gently Spring rains fall – gently Tears flow – quietly Heart bleeding – unseen Words missed – completely Sun warms – eternal Soul sings – unheard Unseen touch – reaching Hope filled words – searching Birds song – serenades Loon calls – mournfully Stars twinkle - brightly Moonlight falls – gently Karen Mc Neil May 25, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What an ambiguous poem you have presented us, Karen. I quite understand it, because I have been in the same situation for much of my crazy,mixed-up life. Your last verse gives me comfort in knowing that everything has resolved itself and is now shaking off the other and can see what is good for you in the future. ~*~ Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.--Aristotle ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Clever arrangement, Startime. Nice. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed, Star! Ms. E |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
exquisite and very sensitive, a subtle poetic touch that is so enjoyable, thanks startime yann |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You weave through many emotions in this Karen and it's tenderly beautiful.... Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Jerry Thanks Jerry...being a red head I am determined *grin* or is that stubborn enough to do the work I need to to become me...*HUGS* Ida Thank you Ida...I am glad you enjoyed it...*HUGS* Ms E. Thank you Ms E. *HUGS* Yann Thank you for the beautiful words...I can't take all the credit...I was inspired by the way secondhanddreampoet writes some of his poetry...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Eric...thank you...it flowed through me with all the emotions tangled in...I am glad you like it...you approval means a lot because you are so talented...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Karen writes, so sweetly! :--------hugs--------) Jaime |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Jaime Thank you so much...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your smile - soulfully enveloping.  This is beautiful, dear Karen, as are you. Margherita |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Margherita Thank you so much for the beautiful words...they are very much appreciated...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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