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Open Poetry #48

An Unfrozen Heart

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

0 posted 2012-05-24 10:41 AM

An Unfrozen Heart

Inflexible, intractable, even adamantine
is an ice chiseled heart's refrigerated sunshine,
chilling its warmth to freeze its rays
to block Love's penetrating singeing blaze.

If gloom within such heart does loom
as an unlived mansion with unlit rooms,
then one ray of Love's illumined heat
will unleash hot breaths of Life's light beat,
deicing, defrosting floors and doors
of this mansion's wind frozen corridors.

Then gloom can't rest in Life's light heart.
There's no room left from end to start.
For the heart now yearns for light displays
of Love's penetrating singeing blaze.

Namyh

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-24 10:52 AM

Scat! Gloom! Scat!

Let the light of love warm your cockles and forever and ever feel like a toasted bagel.

Uh, and that ain't a bad way to feel, you betcha!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-05-24 11:21 AM

What a powerful poem...Love indeed needs to warm this heart...I hope it happens for you...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

3 posted 2012-05-25 01:32 AM

Lovely. As they say: let the sunshine in! And just in time for the warm summer sun.

A

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2012-05-28 05:50 PM

Excellent! Sizzling poetic language, Namyh!

Margherita

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