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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 On hot summer days, Or winter's gray, I walk my own route, With never a pout. My feet in green grass, I dream of a lass, Wind tousles my hair, Old Sol hot to bear. I do not speak once, I'm thought of as dunce. But love's in my soul, And I have a goal. I walk towards her, I can hear her purr, Tomorrow she's mine, Heady as fine wine. ©May 15, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-24-2012 07:48 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You are such a romantic my friend. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. Think I have turned out to be just that, Lori. Absolutely! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
JerryP - Hey! I know that girl. That's my sister! Watch out, she scratches too.LOL. Hello Jerry. I enjoyed this work a lot. Made me smile and brought back good old memories. Just the thing needed today. It must be Destiny at this destination. Whoa! Thanks JP. Namyh |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh Good! I like a bit of scratching, Namyh, that usually means she is having a . . . er . . . good time, and I love giving pretty girls a good time. Glad you liked the poem, and that it helped you cope with today. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Yeah.. I liked it.. I like that feeling, you described well. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
It sure sounds like a possitive destination to me...a total joy to read and the picture gave such softness to it...great writing...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, thank yew, Karen, for such loving comments. I appreciate them so very much, ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your input Zall, thanks. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
The poem was fantastic and the picture was breathtaking to see. It all came together in your very romantic word weaving. Always a pleasure to read your poetry and the pictures that goe with them.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanking you deeply, ken, for the very kind words you gave to my creation. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the pic it's really peaceful. Now this is a nice destination you're headed for. Superb images my friend. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And there she is, indeed as heady as fine wine. Inhale-exhale-whewwwwwww.... You adjusted a couple of half-noted and made me whole. Thank you, Jer.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Really appreciate your thoughts on the poem, Eric. Yes, nice destination in my sights. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Happy I could be of assistance, Karen, in attending to your wholeness. Appreciate your being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Anticipation .... worth the wait! Enjoyed, JP, ms. e |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! You got that right, ms. e. Thanks for being in my world. ~*~ Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.--Aristotle ~*~ |
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