Open Poetry #48 |
The sea's return |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It’s not to say that the story won’t unfold according to the dictates of everybody’s soul and so with heart longing the sea returns to nudge and goad an awakening of the so intractable shore. How patient the sea with her come and go ever waiting and listening intently for her name to be called three times but silence greets her every move. There will come a time of total withdrawal but she can’t hold back for ever and all of the love and agony will crash back onto the shore. “Run!” she whispers, shouts, and roars but the shore in ignorance unmindful of the consequences merely looks the other way . But don’t look at man and his abode for according to soul dictates not ever can any transitory “thing” offer a safe refuge. Beware, oh, beware, sea’s return after her total withdrawal but she offers, of course, a time of grace for the shore to remain as before. Time is uncertain and nobody knows when chaos will reign from peace! Helen / 19 May 2012 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Loved the wordplay here, Helen, and the return of the sea is an awesome (hate that word, but it works here) sight to behold. But until it does indeed make it back the shore will remain pristine and lovely. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Honeybunch, I have a strange feeling we're in biiiiiig trouble. Thought provoking, ms. e |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice work Helen. Much to be contemplated these days. Everything is still alive but it seems to be in the wrong place somehow. Love the anticipation of unleased strength in this. Yes, the sea is so beautiful but fire and water out of control are always dangerous. Loved it and I obviously had some fun with it. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! A stunning vision comes of this poem...with a warning loud and clear...amazing writing...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
my spirit shall rise above the sea there wil be no drowing of my soul or me My spirit will rise |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So much insight... Love this, Helen. Great read. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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