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Open Poetry #48
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Startime1955
Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
0 posted 2012-05-19 12:34 PM

Sweet Passion

Look deep within brown eyes
where sparks can turn to flames
with a glance she reaches
to capture him she seeks

Spring flowing hot in blood
caressed by sun on skin
lifted in gentle wind
serenaded by birds

Opens arms to embrace
blazing sun at twilight
twinkling stars appear
smiling moon gazes down

Soft is a bed of grass
in moonlight they explore
shared dream of true romance
designed loves sweet passion

Karen Mc Neil
May 17, 2012
© Copyright 2012 Karen Mc Neil - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2012-05-19 05:11 AM

Very smooth and sensual Karen.
LOved the romantic flow.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-05-19 05:38 AM

I like that "exploring" line.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
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