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Open Poetry #48

Forever yours... you are everything to me...

l'artiste
Junior Member

since 2011-12-01

Posts 19
Washington

0 posted 2012-05-17 02:54 PM

Take my heart in your hands,
and I will take yours in mine.

Take my words to your heart,
and I will take yours to mine.

Take my love and know it's true,
and I will do the same with yours.

Take my past and let it go,
and I will do the same with yours.

Save a place for me in your heart,
and I will save a place for you in mine.

Save a place in your future for me,
and I will save a place for you in mine.

Take my all,
I give myself to you,
I am yours,
My love for you is never ending...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-17 02:59 PM

If both will do as you have described it will be a beautiful thing. I'm hoping.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-05-17 04:41 PM

So very beautiful... I too hope both do as you write for that would be a very special love...well done...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-05-17 06:46 PM

Enjoyed your poem Artiste,
Ms. E

l'artiste
Junior Member

since 2011-12-01

Posts 19
Washington

4 posted 2012-05-18 03:09 PM

Thanks for the comments, and it is a beautifully special love

thanks for reading

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-05-19 05:41 AM

Hope it works out this is very nicely done.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2012-05-20 08:59 PM

Love this.
Beautiful sentiment and poetry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

7 posted 2012-05-21 10:50 AM

I really love this poem as well.

MusicLynn
New Member

since 2012-03-12

Posts 2

8 posted 2012-05-21 03:55 PM

This is so sweet! Love should always be like this. Love it!

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