Open Poetry #48 |
The Meeting |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Uploaded with ImageShack.us We hugged. My hands felt your velvet gown. My overcoat is old, tattered. The hug was quickly done. You wanted to meet with me. Even though bloodhounds are hot on my trail. We've no words, they've all been spent. We silently weep. Anything else we'd do, Would all those bitter memories repeat. ©May 11, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-15-2012 07:09 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
That was intense! leaves me wanting more... Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Lori. It could use some more story maybe. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very intriguing, Jerry. I owe you an email. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Karilea. I'm at the same address. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Very Powerful...and a great read...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Karen, and (((HUGS)) right back atcha. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Some things are never the same and ya just can't go back them, all you end up doing is living with the memories. Love this man! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the words of wisdom, Eric. Thanks. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
intense and beautiful, jerry, the link is so strong with this person, trhe scene is sensual and sublime, thanks for the enchantment, yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, yann, very much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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