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Open Poetry #46

Night Shaken In Promises

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2010-04-07 05:39 PM

approaching sweet, the night time;
came toward, the earth;
it's strength streaking stars;
lay love with favor.

sleeping in the night;
in the night of eyes;
sand kissing -the sea, child and mother.

slowly, white doves;
drawn off the ground;
violets - spoken, tender.

peaceful eyes, distance -
buries sleep in the night.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-04-07 09:48 PM

Yo dear Laverne,

I like this, in particular the idea of the sand kissing the sea.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-04-11 09:50 PM

Very nice...James

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2010-04-13 08:42 PM

I loved the first stanza...especially the last line of that opening verse...lots of pondering in this one...

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

4 posted 2010-04-16 02:54 AM

Very Lovely.

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