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Call Me Slut
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Call Me Slut |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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My worries will waver With wine as my savior Brush off with a sip Guzzle down my lips The taste of my pride Is swallow down with my lies For when I get down on my knees I'll do what I please And If it bother the others I'll say that their lovers And go on my merry way Making them believe what I say Its not in good distaste For would be quite a waste To let the seeds die in dust Instead of burring them in lust So don't shun when I walk on by For I can hear it in your sighs Call me a bigot maybe a slut But ladies, I'm anything but |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Zach, you are too nice to be called a slut lol enjoyed the read and seeing you post in open  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
We can say "slut" here?  The title is an attention ho, tho. But since you broach the subject, I do think that you have the seed of some good ideas. I'd like to see you probe deeper, however. OH.   Enjoyed. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Always a matter of perspective... but far be it for me to judge. Peace to you and yours. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
This isn't anything really related to me. Just letting ya guys know. Lol. I was inspired by a song and well this came up. Lol. But thanks for reading! -Zach |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Never had the feeling that it was personal... in fact, I thought it had that certain lyrical quality... so you were on the mark as far as I was concerned... and I worked in radio for 15 years so I should know a thing or two of which I speak. But only one or two... I wouldn't want to overtax the brain cells. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Lol. very funny Andrew. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I am laughing and this is full of innuendos nicely done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very  |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Really nice work on this one, Zach, you took it right to the edge! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A bold and well rhymed post here, enjoyed reading a fresh perspective of life...thank you.. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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