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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Different Views I don't think you'll ever understand how sad I am, why I don't care why I am so angry at life and you doing what you want, however unfair. You'll never see the things I saw you'll never know the extent of my sorrow or why I don't care about rules anymore or why it'd be okay if God took me tomorrow. I'm out here stuck in the middle of nowhere and you're somewhere else, pasted to your view you don't see why everything left us different questioning why I don't come back to you. It's not me, the one who left I'd always been standing right behind you there you only had to turn around but didn't instead flew away and now I don't care see, sunglasses do fine for me because you shine too bright to see the way I see, any of my view I don't see you, and you don't see me. |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Powerful write the emotions it invokes are intense excellent scribe! cheers vic |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
An excellent write! A very strong ending there. I bow to you and yours. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a lot of sadness here Dixie and a heap of anger! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lot of vitriol here Dixie, but you shrugg it off you easily with your straight ahead, tell it how it is poetry....if i may say, you try to hide behind transparency and thats why your poems are ALWAYS good...thank you... Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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