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cool hand man & blue ringo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I am sure they would speculate, my dear forney that johnny ringo received something backward when my adjudication replaced his better judgment but I can assure you I dealt with him fairly swearing by all of the faro table pharaohs that my pistol was just by a wit width quicker and that most of my aim was consciously applied although I was surprised at the bullet's mind being of the same opinion on his living or dying perhaps it was due that expensive tennessee whiskey or the residue of your recent lissome attention that left me so close to the heavenly gates already that I had less to lose than johnny had to live for _________ daark (nursery rhymes of john henry holliday) scribblenote..conversation as poetically suggested between big nose kate and doc holliday regarding the johnny ringo epitaph. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
DS, this reads like a scene from a movie. I tried to pick out my favorite part but couldn't. I would have to highlight the entire poem. Great writing! ~Sunkissed  |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
D-We can only wait with baited breath to see how far you take us with Doc and Kate. Yee Hah! ebm. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunkissed ms, thank you for the look in..does feel a bit voyeuristic huh.. ______________ ms ebm, they are unraveling in my glass as we speak, not sure how far they will let me follow either..thanks ms |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I think you mentioned you were fascinated to some degree with the dead man walking humor... I like what you're doing with the series...and the perspective you portray.. the understated humor in this, fits the telling well.. enjoyed sir..as always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cpat..thanks amigo..have always appreciated those with no where to go, but they go there anyway..the docster is one of those..kind of a cowboy samuari without the clean living. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is like tie dye, the assortment of color is so vivid. You're a trip DS, and that would be a good thing. hugs doll~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Great write as always! I like your Doc and Kate series. Enjoyed. Kat >^..^< |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...always a pleasure to have you along..shall we go for a drive? _________________ thanks ms kat, I appreciate your reviews |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: It's your mind that never ceases to amaze me. Great read again! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks so much lady friend.. |
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