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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sometimes I awake from a deep sleep because I think I hear my name called and I find myself answering. I am just awake enough to see my answer slip away into the night... leaving only the faintest echo. Ida Werrett |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, It's interesting that you "see" spoken words in your dreams. Bobby |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I love this kind of dream. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love this Ida. I will be reading it many times. Owl |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
It's probably that old scalawag Toerag hiding 'neathe your bed. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for reading and commenting. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Now,now, let's not pick on Toe. We all know he's a gentleman and a scholar. Ida |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marchmadness - I do the same thing, hearing my name, but no one there... BC |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
like dejavu ... what you describe here is, I believe, an experience common to many of us ... rather 'interesting,' methinks?! VERY well 'penned' ! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate to this! Very well expressed Ida! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a beautiful poem Ida, made me think about... regards yann |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I used to hear "Mom.... Can we go..." I would answer in my sleep my children's questions and then not remember they'd been there. It was no dream, but sometimes I thought it was. They'd say later, "Well, we asked you. You SAID WE COULD!"  Imps! [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (04-04-2010 01:22 AM).] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I have heard those words."Mom" and gotten up to see if some one came in.I have gotten up in the middle of the night to answer the door bell. Even as a teen ager away from home I had to call home as I thought I heard my mother calling during the day. I often wonder if these were messages from someone somewhere? thanks Ida for the memory. latearrival |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Echoes of what was, what is, what will be. A dream within a dream... who is to say what lies beyond the seam of reality and dream. I enjoyed the read. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you've captured the dream-state well...nicely done |
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