Open Poetry #46 |
Bones Is Way Obtuse |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones is way obtuse. He’s a simple child that hasn’t spent much time out of the hood. He has no idea about what kindness exists in the world. He never claimed to be very smart, and to tell the honest truth, he’s not. He thinks everyone lives just like he does. It’s good that Bones is obtuse. If he wasn’t, then the realization that his life is so very different from most kids would destroy him. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
'kindness' exists in the world?! ... effective continuance to the Bones saga! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bruce, Of course kindness exists in the world. You sometimes have to let it find you. Bobby |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If he wasn’t, then the realization that his life is so very different from most kids would destroy him. Now THAT is one profound statement. It also has a flip side in that it keeps kids in the hood, thinking that's the way all life is. This is one of Bone's most hard-hitting snippets. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Balladeer, For your insightful comment. Yes, that's true. We live rather sheltered lives here in the hood. We wouldn't know how to act outside of the hood. I think that might be the case everywhere. I've tried the burbs and the country, but didn't like it there at all. Bobby |
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WindWalker12 Member
since 2009-10-17
Posts 57 |
WOW! This is one fine write!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks WindWalker12, I'm happy that the poem worked for you. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Serenity blaze, For the nice smiley face. Love Bobby |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
He thinks everyone lives just like he does. My life was far different from Bones'... but I remember thinking that. *S* This is great, Bobby... one of your best! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Suthern, I think a lot of children think that way. After all, it's the only life they really know. I'm happy this one worked for you. Love Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Perhaps ignorance is bliss. At least for Bones that is! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
To not know that kindness exists in the world -- that's scary, but that is one of the hard realities that we learn when we look at the life of Bones. He is the epitome of the paradox -- tragedy and triumph. Art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, Ignorance protected Bones when he was very young, until he could handle the truth. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, It did take a long time for Bones to discover the existence of kindness. He found it to be a pleasant surprise. Bobby |
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