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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
0 posted 2010-03-29 07:59 AM


It seems to me
I was born very old
choked by Life
like Benjamin Button,
despaired by anonymous
emotions
and unknown skyscapes,
it seems to me
I was waiting for balance
between me and I,
until I met your heart
like a fountain
in a desert.
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Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2010-03-29 12:01 PM

2islander2 - 'like a fountain in the desert', excellent words. Enjoyed reading even for the third time...

BC
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2010-03-29 06:05 PM

Yo Yann,

This is a nice thing to say.  I like it.

Bobby
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