Open Poetry #46 |
Conquistador |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Conquistador The Conquistador died in the jungle He never did find that city of gold or even the precious fountain of youth -Juju -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, You did good work on some Conquistadors. Poor old Ponce de Leon never did find the fountain of youth, however Coronado did get a mall and a state named after him. Cortez did hit it big in Mexico, and Pizzaro in Peru. Love Bobby |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. It’s the quest that matters Juju, (after all, the cup of Christ is just a cup . . .). John . |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Juju, this is a beautiful poem, we all are conquistadors... regards yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Loved the poem! I hope to learn from those mistakes,to revel in the experience, in the journey of life, and to not concern myself with trivial things like wealth and fading youth. thanks for the read. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Good. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A poem that will remain viable despite all the changes in style that may occur. |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Someone once said "If life is a journey that one lfe's greatest tragedy is to not have enjoy the trip." Enjoyed this thought provoking poem..well done |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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