Open Poetry #46 |
Splendor in Silhouette |
WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Splendor in Silhouette Headed south to Arches National Park, Dessert brown turned to fire as we drove, Down the hill and around a bend, The entrance hidden in a little cove, Then up the side of a massive cliff, Cut into brilliant red sandstone, Away from the hustle of the cities, These monuments that stand all alone, This land of ancient marvels, Monoliths and arches so grand, Over 1000 of every size and shape, We hiked them, hand in hand, As we climbed up the red slick rock, On narrow trails and over hills, We arrived at our destination Its grandeur gave us chills, Delicate Arch is Magnificent, Beautiful in shape and size Natures spectacle in carved red stone, Forever, reaching for the skies, Our favorite vacation destination is Arches, Incomparable, splendor, in silhouette, Everyone should see the wonders of this place, It’s an adventure you will never forget. { Arches National Park is located in the South east part of Utah, near Moab} The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Then up the side of a massive cliff, Cut into brilliant red sandstone, Away from the hustle of the cities, These monuments that stand alone, This land of ancient marvels, Great monoliths and arches grand, Over 1000 of every size and shape, We hiked them, hand in hand, Hi Tracey you have written a great poem my friend, painted into a vivid word picture. Very descriptive writing and most enjoyable to read. Take care. Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice descriptive writing...James |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Son, you have done it again. Wonderful so vived, so in tune with the vastness of Utahs glory. Love Mom |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words paint such vivid images, I feel as though I've stepped away from my chores and into a wonderful vacation! This is so very beautiful! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
So sorry I have been remiss in replying to your comments, Thank you all so very much for leaving such great thoughts and comments on my poetry. Your greatly appreciated. Love always, Tracey |
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