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Open Poetry #46

Pain(t).

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2010-03-24 01:47 AM

I wished I could take your pain
take your pain in two cupped hands
and show you how small it was
how little it actually hurt
blow upon it wings, and set it free.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-03-24 01:55 AM

I wish I could do the same thing also. This was a nice piece of work.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2010-03-24 01:56 AM

Thanks Earl.

I think we all wish.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2010-03-24 01:57 AM

Indeed we all wish we could do the same.....this is a gentle beauty~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2010-03-24 02:04 AM

You always make me happy that I stop to read. Love your poetry.

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2010-03-24 10:48 AM

Honeybee, thank you.

Aliboopadooooooowop... You always make me glad you stop to read as well. Synergyyyyyy!!

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2010-03-24 11:45 AM

ah Paul, it seems when we are in pain, we think it's the biggest thing in the universe when actually it's just a passing moment in time

beautifully captured here

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2010-03-25 02:59 PM

A wonderfully poetic way to "treat" pain, dear Paul!

Enjoyed this.

Love,
Margopargo

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2010-03-25 03:55 PM

Passing shadows... Thank you.

Glad you liked it.

MArgoparrrrgo... Thank you, mademoiselle.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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