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Spring (haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * Spring weeps soft dew drops hearts desire butterfly dreams sunbeams lift sadness * * |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is a neat haiku. Love Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
As lovely as spring itself, Margherita! It inspires me to attempt the haiku for the first time. Best wishes -- Art |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How pretty!  |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The word choice that you used was perfect. Each word was full of color and must have been carefully chosen. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
her name is margo margopargo that is and I don't like to write haikus because I suck at 'em but it turns out she she doesn't at all she totally rules. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed they do!  |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
What a lovely way to welcome spring in a short, yet powerful haiku. Amazing  |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Very nice my friend lovely haiku. hugs vic |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh Margherita, you never miss. simply lovely! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A beautiful picture dear Margherita with words to match. I loved it and you too. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Once again you prove yoursef to be a master of the haiku, Marghaerita. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Margherita, it is Autumn here in the Southern Hemisphere, but it is still lovely to read your beautiful Spring poem and see the outstanding photo, both shared with us by such a lovely person and poet. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
This is great! And really love the picture. ooxx Marti |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Beautiful picture and beautiful words. Each sentence a thought unto itself. Lovely. Joyce |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Swelled into smile, all about the day! Thank you for writing this. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, you are all so kind and loving. Enjoy your Sunday! Love, Margherita |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed.. nicely done.. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So lovely, Margherita! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very beautiful and exquisite... yann |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Don't get me started on my kitty-kicker haikus, Margherita - lol |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
waiting for those butterfly dreams ~~ lovely work, M |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Very nice Margherita My respect Nourzihane |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Very nice margherita My respect Nourzihane |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Poet friends, for reading and commenting so kindly! Love, Margherita |
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