Open Poetry #46 |
For Ever, and a Day |
WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
For Ever, and a Day I love your lips; I love your kisses, They take my breath away, As in my poems, the emotions felt, Words can mean more than they say, I feel your heart; I see your soul, I hear what you whisper to me, I reach for you, you take my hand, And we let our spirits run free, Quiet your fears, and dry your tears, For as tenderly as I can, With limitless clarity, you will see You can always trust this man. So come to me, don't hesitate, For we know what we desire, Yes, love is more than emotions, Yet, emotions can start a fire, I love your lips; I love your kisses, They take my breath away, Press yours to mine, like you mean it, Right Now, For ever, and a day. . The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Tender and passionate all at once, dear Tracey. Lovely write. Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Passionate perfection!! This is absolutely beautiful, my friend... both the words and the heart they offer. *S* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Absolutely beautiful!!! I LOVE love poems! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
So come to me, don't hesitate, For we know what we desire, Yes, love is more than emotions, Yet, emotions can start a fire, I think you had better watch out Tracey in case you start a fire that you can't put out. you wrote it very well my friend. enjoyed. Take care. Lindsay |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic! Love this! |
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