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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-03-21 07:48 AM

I guess we both had our issues then
with siouxs and sues and arrow shirts
and little big horns we thought of
filled with special kinds of pleasures

when we were just the gold fish boys
with jesus loves me in our eyes
and hope in some dark skined salvation
I still laugh at that poster of him

where dope was misspelled with an h
and ball bearing jabbering was rampant
selling his medicine to the chronic blind
using fish eyed nancy and her logic show

so history will be in the color of the pen
_______________

daark

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-03-21 08:13 AM

I love the word play that you employ in this piece. Such interesting collocations!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2010-03-21 09:41 AM

"I guess we both had our issues then"

relate more than you even know !!!

happy to see you here
reading you is like relaxing on a rainy morning in flannels drinking coffee by the window

hope you are well

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2010-03-21 11:16 AM

I really do need to read you more often...
your ink flows with character.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2010-03-21 01:07 PM

This memorabilia of another time
carried well in the inks used
to decry the passages of change...

Well done, DS.

As always,

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2010-03-21 01:18 PM

"I guess we both had our issues then
with siouxs and sues and arrow shirts...

where dope was misspelled with an h"
_________________________________________

I love the above lines, especially "where dope was misspelled with an h" how clever is that?!!

As usual, I enjoy your poetic expression, your imagery, your clever word-play; you often bring to life subjects that are overused and yet you can add a unique and new spin to it. ~And of course, I relate to this poem!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-03-21 02:09 PM

most humble thanks pipcrewfriends....you make me smile with your touches

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2010-03-21 02:49 PM

Hey,

I have missed you and I have missed your words weaving through my day.

Ali-san

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2010-03-21 05:23 PM

quote:
so history will be in the color of the pen

And you are an extraordinary painter through masterful poetry, like this one.

This is so deep and beautiful.

With you back here again Pip has put on its charming smile again, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2010-03-21 05:34 PM

enjoyed

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2010-03-22 05:53 PM

Picking a favorite part is impossible... it's all superb... and begs to be spoken. *G*

Wonderful!!!

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