Open Poetry #46 |
Once was a swallow (lol) |
kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
Once upon a time the sun did shine and the wind filled the wings of a swallow This swallow did sing unto no one but him Because he believed he had no rules to follow While singing his song he felt something was wrong His tummy had become rather hollow He found a nice spot and there he did stop As a cat came from no where and swallowed At his demise he found out with out a shred of doubt We all have rules we must follow [This message has been edited by kudanesh (03-18-2010 12:26 PM).] |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I really like this, a nice little tale, fable like, with a moral for living. Great work! Art |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
thank you. kinda what I hoped for. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, no, I am so sorry for this singing swallow! Dear Andrew, though it makes me sad, this is a very well written piece. Love, Margherita |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
Thank you. In way it makes me unhappy to hear that it makes you sad. But on the other hand it shows that you have a kind and caring heart |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delightful Andrew, though I too feel sad for the swallow. |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
The rules of the world must apply. even the worlds most wonderful creatures have to follow some laws and rules. the poor swallow just found out the hard way thank you for your comment |
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