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Open Poetry #46

We Are Both The One

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-03-17 02:52 PM

I want to be the one
That turns you inside out
To consummate your mind
Starting with your mouth

As I breathlessly proclaim
All the passion I bring
To release those in you
And let them take wing

Be assured that our love mutual
The joy to give everything, ours
We will drown in afterglow
As we lose sense of minutes, hours

I want to be your sacred soul
Your state of pleasure grace
I am here for you, the real you
In whatever time and space

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-03-17 04:46 PM

any woman would love to hear this

beautiful thoughts

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2010-03-19 12:09 PM

I can't believe the females here aren't swooning over this one yet....

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2010-03-19 09:25 PM

*sighs* love this!!!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2010-03-22 05:35 PM

I can't imagine anyone wanting more... for you're offering everything. *S* Absolutely fantastic! *S*

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2010-03-22 05:41 PM

hot dayum.

this is excellent, certainly one of your best. I can't see any way to improve on this.

dang.

a REALLY good love poem.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2010-04-02 09:20 PM

I want to be your sacred soul
Your state of pleasure grace
I am here for you, the real you
In whatever time and space

You have written this touching poem very well my friend, you sound like the answer to a maiden's dream, well done.

Lindsay

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