Open Poetry #46 |
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Clayoquot |
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WindWalker12 Member
since 2009-10-17
Posts 57 |
Clayoquot O the tall! stately majestically waving cone-filled branches dark-green old growth Douglas fir: sways its rugged head in the rain-soaked breeze the salty ocean breeze the breath of a thousand years ages when the land spoke of life, simple, when the salmon ran heedless, free up fast flowing rivers of crystal rains translucent greens reflected a million times upon wrinkled mirrors that sang past sands where beaver tails left trails where tiny twin-hoofed prints laughed into the new day: before the campfires and children's laughter stood the tree tall and proud sure time-less home for bird and beast above its head: the home of the gods the chainsaw came one day leaving only a bleeding stump a homeless eagle five dead squirrels and the ageless tree crashed! to its side across the mountain side, dying: the river, the reflections, the breath of God, footprints in the sand; the fish; the old ways which intermingled in the forest: all died that day |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this and can sure feel the pain of our earth these days. I live right in the thick of trees. Sometimes with all the cleared areas here, they get angry, and in the wind let us know it, but otherwise they behave. It is just so sad to see the amount of clearing for housing going on. I don't even know what is the answer. We all are going to regret this and sooner than we think! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this write speaks with the 'voice' of Gaia ... I as especially fond of: old growth Douglas fir: sways its rugged head in the rain-soaked breeze the salty ocean breeze the breath of a thousand years ages when the land spoke of life, simple, when the salmon ran heedless, free up fast flowing rivers of crystal rains translucent greens reflected a million times upon wrinkled mirrors that sang past sands where beaver tails left trails where tiny twin-hoofed prints laughed into the new day" MUCH (sustained) applause for this fine stewardship of Nature 'penning' ! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
continuing applause for this fine 'penning' !! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it does indeed speak with the voice of Gaia there are simply some poets on these pages who can always be counted on to cause a shiver and a catch in the breath this is fine work WindWalker |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This poem touches me and makes me very sad as I remember the forest where I played as a child. Progress took my part of the forest. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This ripped out what is left of my tattered heart, after the sorrows of losing first my Daisy-dog, then our Kacy. Fictional or not, I hope the Douglas Fir is now alive and well again, shading Kacy and Daisy and Flicka, my horse, in the Hereafter. Owl |
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