Open Poetry #46 |
"Change" |
Arius Miura de Galdri Member
since 2007-07-04
Posts 90Michigan, USA |
"Change" People change as surely as the seasons Though most would not admit a change has come And many change uncertain of the reasons And others know exactly what it's from Moments in our lives can mold and shape us For good or ill, the choice is ours to make We mustn't let the chance to change escape us To stagnate in ourselves is a mistake December 20, 2009 AMdG "My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!" -Edna St. Vincent Millay |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The message of your poem was understood that change is inevitable and that we must continue to strive and adapt. If only life were so easy. Sigh.... |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
It is said that the more things change the more they stay the same. I hope that doesn't apply to people. It would be like a process of changing only to the extent that one reinforces and fortifies his narrow view of the world, as in, say, angry political ideology that is so rampant today. I really like your poem -- very wise and instructive. Art |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I remember my father saying more than half a century ago -- change is the very scheme of life. I have built on that idea, and have gained so much by it. Again, I appreciate your poem. Thanks, Art |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I really agree with you and thank you for the positive note. latearrival |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
totally agree! well done! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Arius, thanks for the thoughtful poem and the true message, we have not to ignore ourselves , we have to change... regards yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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